Candle Light

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Candle Light

Author: Shannon Albo

Love is like a candlelight,
Glowing in the dark
The warmness kindles
From a tiny spark.

The light is soft at first,
Then, it grows bright,
For some, it grows over time,
For some, it's love at first sight.

If not taken care of,
The flame will slowly die
And when it's gone, it leaves you
Sitting there, wondering, why?

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makenzy



beutiful choice of words


thank u a lot



thanx for passing dear

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Aseera

thanks alot

for caring

you make me happy

to write here

best wishes

[Gad]

Thanks alot

for the nice word


Gad

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مــاكنزي

beutiful choice of words

thanks

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Gad

thanks alot for passing by my words

your signature makes the words brighter

keep in touch

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طبعي

Thanks alot

For passing and signing

You made my page brighter and nicer

keep in touch

[أبو الفـــــدا]

And when it's gone, it leaves you
Sitting there, wondering, why




First I smoked acigarette to understand the poem very well

really love like the light it gives us the sight

and also really we must care of it cause of it may be will die

and if it leave us

what we will do


we must think of it very well

Makenzy

Thanx alot
nice poem

Abu Elfeda

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Abu Elfed

Thanks alot for your nice comment

It enriches the poem

By the way the poem is not mine this time

keep in touch

[moon14light]

ماكنزي

thx alot for these cute words

accept my greeting
urs
moon14light